A more open ended approach.
It seems so many of us suffer from the same OCD trait of constant (and mostly needless) editing.
I like this story. Easy to follow. Relatable. I feel like the "She" needs a name. But that might just be me.
Good work, thanks for sharing!
Well said! I think the authors who inspire us to do the opposite are just as important as the ones who aspire us to try and emulate. Also, great writing! I'm excited to read more.
It seems so many of us suffer from the same OCD trait of constant (and mostly needless) editing.
I like this story. Easy to follow. Relatable. I feel like the "She" needs a name. But that might just be me.
Good work, thanks for sharing!
Well said! I think the authors who inspire us to do the opposite are just as important as the ones who aspire us to try and emulate. Also, great writing! I'm excited to read more.